Heavy foot, crushing the soft snow
Nothing left but a dark print.
The wind
Blowing hard on his dark brown hair
Leaving small snowflakes in between each strand
He looked around
Nothing but white surrounded him
As if it were a piece of paper waiting
to be written on.
He was alone
His family
Happily singing inside the dark car
Now gone
Unexpectedly crashing on the icy road
Wife and kids, now slept
In peace
He was alone
All that was left.
A small tear fell down his frozen cheeks
Holding all that was left of his hopes and dreams
It fell fast
And splashed in the snow
Sinking down
His hands
Shaking
And don’t stop
His body
Freezing
as if he was stuck inside an ice cube
his veins slowed,
turning into blocks of ice
causing his heart to beat sluggishly
as if freezing
he was over
he gave up
his knees bent to the ground as if to lay there forever
but they didn’t
something shone in the distance
hope, life, happiness
he got up and ran like he never had
his heart
slowly beating faster
the light was his only hope
hope for survivel
his only chance for life
the light got closer
he made out a house
closer, closer
the closer he came the faster he went
CRASH!
Small wood shreds flew across the cabin
And the door knob fell down on the broken down floor
He had done it
He had survived
In front of him were two pale figures
Both of them
Dressed in white colored clothes
His wife and kids
He looked down at himself
His both hands
Pale and cold
His clothes
All dyed with white ice.
He had gone
He was never alive
He had been all this time
One of them.
Wow epic story. You know being Caroline just now taught me a valuable lesson. I thought you were my worst enemy but all along you were my best FRIEND! - GLaDOS :P haha anyway the story was cool and I enjoyed reading it but I have only two issues with it. It was a bit long and the color doesn't really look appealing. Like Mrs. Meadows said today couldn't you get a better one. All in all it was a good 2 minutes :)
ResponderExcluirGood poem Leaniad.
ResponderExcluirThe one problem is that you mention two figures and then indicate three.
Other than that, fantsatic. :)